I had a firm belief that
contemporary love-stories under the popular fiction genre, come in rigid
frames. I thought that there couldn’t be anything beyond a hero, a heroine, a
villainous or favourable plot and a happy or tragic ending. With the impact being
more on the characters and their development, I believed that these
love-stories are destined to have nothing more to offer in terms of script and
story development.
And here, I gleefully
wonder at this shattered belief of mine after reading “Dawn at Dusk” by Mr.
Gaurav Sharma. Not only the characters, but the development of the story itself
left me in awe. What more to say about the narration which gives rapturous feelings
for those hungry readers who starve for the beauty of words. And as if the book
in itself wasn’t charismatic enough, the writer’s profile mind-blowing. Yes,
Mr. Sharma is a Mathematics teacher. This book, which is adorned with the
beauty of literature, has come from a mind full of integers. Yes, the wizard of
numbers creates magic with words.
I wonder how ecstatic it
would be to have Mathematics lessons from a teacher who writes. Elaborating
theorems and axioms couldn’t have been easier. Sir, if you were my Mathematics
teacher, I would never have been that poor in Calculus and Algebra.
About the Author
Besides everything, a
formal introduction of the writer is necessary. After devoting more than twenty
years in teaching mathematics, Mr. Gaurav Sharma turned to a long cherished
dream of being a published author. Half the day, he plays with numbers and for
the other half, he is a puppet in the hands of his stories. A diehard optimist,
lively and a lover of life, he wants his stories to stir the consciences.
“Dawn at Dusk” is his
third book after “Lova@AirForce” and “Rapescars”. Besides, he writes
magnificent prose and poetry in Hindi. His Hindi works can be read at http://gauravkipotlise.blogspot.in/
Storyline and
Plot-Structure
“Dawn at Dusk” has a
straight and evolving storyline. After losing his parents and being ditched by
his wife, Aaradhya’s emotionally disturbed soul finds solace in Sambhavi’s
intellectual and balanced company. He wants to take the relationship to another
level but Sambhavi wants him to prove himself first. Aradhya takes it as a
challenge and embarks himself on a journey which not only changes his views
about life but also unleashes his stronger self. The story may not be called
unique but the treatment of the storyline and technique is flawless. It is not
the curiosity of the fate of their relationship which keeps the readers glued
to the book, but the introspective journey of Aradhya which enhances the beauty
of reading.
“Dawn at Dusk” is an
unusual romance. In spite of having all the general characteristics of a
romance fiction, it cannot be termed normal. In a straight plot, it is the
intricacy of the story development which appeals. After long time, I have
across such beautiful story development. The plot structure is technically
straight and well configured. Instead of scene breaks, Mr. Sharma has
considered small chapters which is quite a positive change.
However, the book ends
sooner than expected. Some more twists and thrills in the plot could make the
book more interesting.
Narration and Dialogues
Now, here comes the best
feature of the book. Mr. Sharma is, undoubtedly, incredible in terms of
narration. I don’t know what words use to describe his narrative skills. Lucid,
vivid, beautiful, marvelous, amazing… all words fall short to describe his
prowess. His words do not create a book, but paint a picture on the canvas on
reader’s mind. The proverb ‘A picture speaks a thousand words’ can prove to be
wrong in his condition because his words can subside the finest elegance of a
picture. The usage of Scottish and Latin origin words is a feast to literature
hungry readers.
Dialogues are relative
and just. They are not glossy but articulate enough to go with the story. The
blend of narration and dialogues is perfect in the book. Mr. Sharma takes some
references of Indian literature studies and uses dialogues to create beautiful
scenes which mark the progress of the story and also the characters.
Characterization
Characterization is
another feature which makes “Dawn at Dusk” remarkable in treatment. The
protagonists Aradhya and Sambhavi complement each other. Aradhya plays the role
of an emotionally unstable youth who falls in love with Sambhavi and rises in
life. He discovers that true love never harms, instead adds meaning to life.
Sambhavi is a mature woman with composed personality. She helps Aradhya in
introspecting himself and discover his worthiness.
Mr. Sharma has been
quite technical with his characters. In this book, he touches almost every
aspect of life and stratum of society through his characters. Through the life
story of Sambhavi he depicts the hostility of the society for women. Aradhya represents
the enthusiastic youth of India who can do wonders under proper guidance. Meera
is the jovial and bubbly girl who, with the deep understanding of life, learns
to live it to the fullest. Meera could be a role model for those people for
whom intellect and liveliness become simultaneous characteristics. Shekhar represents
an ideal friend who stands with his friend in all ups and downs. Devyani
represents evilism. All other characters such as Uma, Sudesh, Deda Baba,
Ravinder etc. play significant roles in their respective frames.
Treatment of Love and
Romance
“Dawn at Dusk” has the
elements of an epic love story. The love-story of Aradhya and Sambhavi
germinates and proliferates slowly. It takes its own time and grows within its
circumference. Love fills Aradhya with internal energy. With the power of love,
he breaks open the cocoon of his personality and emerges as a crusader. Mr.
Sharma instills sensitive strings of emotions in the guitar of love and plays
this melody of a novel a lovelorn heart longs to cherish. “Dawn at Dusk” such a
soothing tale of romance that it can inculcate the belief of love even in most
rigid heart. Even the passive love of Meera is as vibrant as the notes of
Sitaar. “Dawn at Dusk” manifests all the virtues of love – devotion, care,
nurture, value and respect.
“Dawn at Dusk” is the
novel version of Jagjit Singh’s famous ghazal – ‘Na umr ki seema ho na janm ka
ho bandhan…’
If you wish to know what
love is, “Dawn at Dusk” by Mr. Gaurav Sharma is your perfect guide.
Thank you. Overwhelmed.
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